Film Pitch draft, Padlet response from Audience and Amendments.

Me and My Partner created a draft film pitch of the idea of our opening sequence:

Draft Treatment for Horror Film from Bryony Johnson


We then asked a group of people who fit in with our target audience to give feedback, so if there are changes to be made to appeal to our target audience we can do so, we received feedback by using Padlet:

Created with Padlet

Some of the responses said that it may be difficult to portray the 1970s as we may not be able to show it realistically enough. We will change this so that it is only set in the present day. Also, the background story may be a bit confusing, therefore we will create a different storyline which is clearer and still fits in with a horror genre conventional narrative.

We will try our best to make the vampires look realistic. To achieve this we will use fake blood and fangs.